Child of Lot

Born broken to a

mother who pushed her  

into a world wordless

with grief, sure her

father that she feared,

had mixed a dose

of poison in a

drink that he bade

her give the mother

that she adored who

drank it to the

last and died in

anguish on the night

that good night became

goodbye for ever more,

she was splinted with

popsicle sticks and grew,

walked, ran, but never

up or away from

the sorrow, but always

toward the salt-caked

embrace of this woman

who was never free

of guilt or ghost

that took turns with

their haunting of her

heart and soul and

those of her baby,

who nursed at the

breast of Lot’s wife.

©Dana Hughes 3.4.25

3 thoughts on “Child of Lot

  1. Fascinating. I went back and reread the story of Lot in Gen 19, and your angle of vision on the daughter enriches that tale. I was riveted by your image of the “salt embrace” of the mother (Lot’s wife) that the daughter never escapes. Hard poem, but worth the time to read it. Typical of your spare, unflinching style to look at such a terrifying text and see in it the beginnings of a poem. Thanks for this.

  2. By the way, if you’re interested, I’m posting my own writing on my WordPress blog, ShapeandSubstance.com. I think you’re a subscriber, but if not I’d love to have your reactions to what you read there. All the best, P.

  3. Dearest Paul:

    First, thank you for sharing your poetry blog with me. I’ve missed reading your work and I need the power of your words these days.

    Second, thank you for your comments on my latest. It’s always delightful to hear what you think of my musings. The poem is autobiographical, not biblical. I am the child of Lot.

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